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A poem by me!

It's strange how hard it rains now,
While I'm sitting here under these dark clouds,
But I'm holding on under their dark shrowd,
For the day that the sun will come out,
Everything I ever had was taken from me in one single hour,
But they can take all they want to take,
But they can't sucseed in taking my inner peace from me,
But to much time has passed to lamet that once apon a time my life was happy,
My heart can not heal the tears,
The wind is blowing,
My soul is crying,
I can't and won't cry anymore.

 

Angel

You hold me up through all the storms
You say hello in the halls
And though I never tell you what's on my mind
You stay the angel I can love

 

stop, no more! ur making me cry!

 

My published poem was a lot sadder I don't know I guess people like depressing poems I just wright from my heart.

 

I wrote that poem there just now

 

Very nice, VL and Inu, they both flow well and are very well worded. I like. ^^

Alright, here we go. ::Cracks his knuckles:: I came up with both of these just today at school...

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Everything's alright
Vacant voice from her
Eyes that reveal nothing
Real tears rolling my cheeks
Yes, it's all okay
Those words she says to me
Her eyes just empty
I can't see through my tears
No, everything's fine
Goodbye, something I never heard
I can't show my true feelings
So she doesn't hurt me anymore
When I try to tell her I love her
Oh, everything is peachy
No, really, it doesn't hurt
Don't feel a thing
Everyone, just smile
Really, everything's peaceful
For this dagger in my heart from
Undying love I hold
Leaves no scar or pain
No, don't worry about me
On the other side,
With cold steel I'll be
Right now, it's all complete
Everyone won't miss me
All those fake smiles
Like they really care
Like she didn't love me
Yes, everything is wonderful now

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Really regret it
Every time I think about it
Getting over it
Really isn't working
Every time I think
Think about the mistake I made
In sorrow I'll dwell
To try and get over it

 

wow. those poem are amazing arkanjil. I almost started crying. I feel that way alot.

 

wow good poem.

 

hey everyone i've writtin on to my poem: angel. well here:

Angel

You hold me up through all the storms,
You say hello in the halls,
And though I never tell you what's on my mind,
You stay the angel I can love.

Time goes by and seasons change,
But no matter what I do,
You're always there right by my side,
Like angels have always done.

I see you everyday first class,
Oh and chit-chat afterwards,
And say goodbye to you oh my beloved,
But hope that its not true.

I tell myself that it won't last,
And that it never would,
Also that our friendship isn't worth the risk,
But why is that holding me back?

Is it that I'm afraid of love,
And what that love might bring,
I have no idea why it scares me so much,
How can I ask if you love me too?

So now I ask with all my heart,
The one question that I fear,
Do you love me oh dearest friend of mine,
Even the slightest bit at all?



you guys tell me if you like it!

 

thats REALLY good !
i think ill write a poem.....

 

have you written a poem yet?

 

still working on it:sweat:.
i dont really wanna post it though, cause it will look really **** compared to wat you guys can do:shy3:.
but, yeah, still working on it.

 

finally, i have finished my poem. it is a bit crap, compared to you guys, but what the hell.

YOUR LOVES A GIFT

I think about you all the time
And wish one day that you'll be mine
Your my only love, thats true
So this poems especially for you.

I am the bee, you are my flower
Your love gives me strength and power
You are the beating of my heart
Without you here, id fall apart

You build a fire, ill guard the flames
You go to live on Mars, ill do the same
You commit a crime, ill take the blame
Ill make it right, so you wont be ashamed

Your like sunshine on a freezing day
Your loves a gift, thats all to say
In a dream, your all i see
I cant describe what you mean to me

:shy3:

 

(*sigh* Sarah looks up at Blood Pheonix in pure adoration.)
Wow! That's beatiful:blush:
I wish I could write poetry like that. Mine sucks.
I thought my poem would be too long, and besides it's not that well thought out. Christina (inuyasha is cool) keeps asking me at school who its for. I don't think I could tell even her and she's my best friend!

 

yeah sarah cause i'm a blaber mouth gossip queen. NOT! I hardly talk to anyone and if i do talk to you your probably not a b**** or an a******. anyways here's one i just wrote.

Days Go By

The days go by,
I sit and cry for something unknown to me,
My light is gone,
to the unknown,
A deep dark whole is left,
But I suppose to much time has passed to lament that you were here,
darkness slowly crwals over my soul,
Pain knows not time,
Nor does sarrow,
But it does not do to dwell on the past,
For many that die deserve life and many that live deserve death,
I don't give it to them,
such a crule fate that we would be put on this earth to die.
If my destiny was for you to be taken away from me when I was three,
Then destiny has no soul.

 

I understand though sarah.

I Cannot Heal The Pain

The wind keeps blowing.
My heart cannot heal the pain.
Someone cry for me witkh parched eyes.
I only want to know what trud sadness is.
Thin I'll know what true happiness is.
I cry out on the insid but never on the outside.
People do not understand or care.
So many players you'd think it's a ballgame.
Every body wants something.
no one wants to help or share my pain.
This life gets lonely.
well they'll get theirs eventually I hop I'm there.
I drank your poison because you told me it's wine.
Shame on me if you fooled me once shame on me if you fooled me twice.
In this day and age it's every man for himself.
So what good am I to you if I can't be broken?
I may cry ant the tears are solemn and sad to see.
But I cry for this HOPELESS world.
There is little good in it.
And when you can't even turn to your family it is hopeless.
This is my Vietnam.
I'm at war.
Life keeps on drpping bombs.
All I can do is wait for it to pass.

 

hey sarah did you know that I'm really bord and mad and frustrated right now so I thought I'd write some more to get it all out. just thought you guys should know.

My family

This world is full of posers and lies,
I just want to be me,
Yet what you expect me to be is not me,
I don't know what you can expect me to do,
I'm not someone who will be walked all over and stepped on,
I feel what I feel,
If that doesn't appeal to you let me know,
And I'll go,
Because I flow better when my colors show,
I'm not one to do anything to sparkle in someone's eyes,
I'm sick of suffering, fighting, and always compromising and never getting what I want to please someone else to survive in my own house,
I do all of this for some one who doesn't give a d*** about me,
I guess I thought you'd have the decency to change,
My mistake,
Yet I'm forced to live with you every day,
slowly day by day my heart grows cold to all of you,
I've lost my patients with you,
I'm extremely surprised it too eight years to happen but it did,
I wish I could leave and never come back but I have to stay and put up with you abuse,
I hear excuses everyday for the abuse and I'm sick of it,
I will go and when I do I'll never come back,
I will be me no matter what you do,
You will never win and you can give it up because I've got a backbone stronger than yours,
I don't need no one trying to make me over,
Everybody's always trying to knock me over,
You want to break me down,
Well I've got news for you.
I will succeed and be happy without you.

 

only 2 more.

Stars

I see the stars in the sky,
And while I see them I realize I will always fly if held down,
I've always known what was right,
I just didn't know that I would peal away and chose to see with such a different sight,
I will never see the sky the same way,
And I will always say good-bye to yesterday,
There is a never ending peace in the sky,
one I long for each day.

 

last one.

I hate you mom for marrying him.
I hate you for not stopping them.
I hate you for not being there for me.
I think your patheric sending me to thearapy as if it will make me hate all of you less.
Quit living in the past you say.
Well I'm terrified of how worse the futer will be if they're in it.
I cannot bigin to discribe the anger, pain, and sarro I feel but... I'll try,
The anger is like a burning fire.
It's so bad my stomach gets tight and I start to feel sick just sitting there taking your s*** and taking their s***.
Think god that I'm VERY restrained.
The pain is like a knife stabbing.
And the sarrow... The sarrow is beyond words.
But it doesn't matter how I feel.
You send me to therapy so I'll "get over it".
I was very close to the breaking point.
well I just passed it.
I HATE YOU!!!!
Go on get me medication so I'll be "happier".