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  1. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Write your poem here.
    I'll start.

    Losing Hope
    A love lost but found again
    A laugh longed to begin again
    A smile stolen without a cause
    A hand stopped with a sudden pause

    A mouth missed from kisses of bliss
    A nibble on an ear that is missed
    A sweet fragrant that can never be bought
    A touch that was so soft that was lost

    A pleasure that was felt almost everywhere
    A soft and warm hand on parts that are bare
    Three small, tiny words that could never be spoke
    The lost of a love one is the beginning of hope

    Tell me what you think ;)
     
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  2. Influences

    Influences New Member

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    I once heard god

    Lashing out in front of me the flame twists and turns,
    I beg that it stop but on it burns,
    Enchanting fear into many of the eyes,
    The people stop to hear only silent crys,
    Darkness has haunted my thoughts for an age or two,
    From allie to enemy...from greman to jew,
    Trauma devistates the nations...As plagues find the scythes,
    Alone I stand...Alone I yern.....

    Greyscale

    Slow much too,
    Forever long the spirits rise,
    Hate for the oblivious,
    Destroy the absoulte nothing of you conquest's ancestors,
    Evil heart of lands,
    Soar distorted commands,
    Blood from the chair and it's loss of hair,
    Play it game and cut your loosings,
    Bid not you life but your opinion,
    Hang over from stabbing 4 Am.,
    undieing memorys of lightnings past,
    Drown the innocent,
    Misplaced for the guilt,
    Anti-Cult forever repulsed....
     
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  3. Akusi

    Akusi New Member

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    My Poems

    Trees Of Time

    Life Is slow
    As If it has no Flow
    But Time Has Not taken a blow
    The Sands of time still fall
    falling without a stall
    without feeling
    no way of thinking
    all those tree seedlings
    grow tall and spread
    as time leaves its treads
    the tress grow weary with dread
    because with the passing of time
    they know they will soon be dead
    the feel the pain
    as death spreads thru them
    they cry in agony
    but nothing hears them yell
    only the sounds of the wind
    the wind wrestling with the leaves
    as death slips upon them
    they wait for there final moments
    But life begins to slow
    and time feels lost
    but its still there
    the pain just kills the mind
    as kills your body
    leaving your soul to die in sorrow

    Pandoras Box

    Im Trapped
    Trapped in Pandoras Box
    No Light
    Nothing but darkness
    Darkness
    I know im not alone
    I sense the creature moving around me
    Waiting
    Waiting for the right time to strike
    I feel it brush against me
    I try to catch it
    But all I catch is darkness
    The Darkness
    The Darkness is Consuming me
    Tearing me Apart
    I cant stand it any more
    I have lost my mind
    And than it strikes
    The creature in the darkness
    It goes underneath my skin
    Its Trying to become me
    No
    No its not
    Its Joining with me
    I can feel the anger and hate
    Rage with Jealousy Pain and Suffering
    But what scares me the most
    Is that im Enjoying it
    My muscles begin to change
    My body Begins to Mutate
    My Soul has Dies
    My Life Has Ended
    But a new one has begun
    A life of Murder Death and Chaos
    I have become a Creature of Darkness
    I have become death him self
    When i leave this box
    Mass Genocide will be caused by thy hands
    Destruction is on my mind
    For i am the Creature
    The Creature of Pandoras Box
     
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  4. Odin

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    “Liftoff”

    Liquid oxygen breaks off
    Flakey, dry skin
    Falling . . . falling . . . breaking like ice
    Amongst a stream of fire.

    Dust and smoke spread
    Blocking view of the rocket
    As it shoots through grey; through blue;
    through black.

    I wonder how the pilot feels
    Forced back against his seat.

    “It’s like my model, only bigger!”
    says Jimmy, as he watches from the top of a car’s roof.
    He wonders if the toy in his hands
    Can go that far.

    Blinding like the sun
    It leaves a corona crowned
    By a halo
    Of Sky and Clouds.

    A Phoenix streaks up through the sky
    Spreading behind its burning trail
    Towards space.

    A hope for many
    Or death for few.
    Pioneering Mankind’s future.
    -Odin
     
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  5. Inu-loves-Kago

    Inu-loves-Kago New Member

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    I came up with this poem all by myself. I feel really proud about it too. It's a poem fanfiction I did for Escaflowne. I hope you all like it:

    Destiny and Angels


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    Visions of a planet



    And an angel she did see



    The power to foretell the future



    Would lead her to her destiny



    A bet with her superior



    Under 13 seconds for the 100-meter dash



    Would win her a kiss



    But a boy she did clash



    He spoke a weird language



    And ordered them to run



    But the dragon appeared



    And it was time for some fun



    He fought as best he could



    He tried to defend those he didn’t know



    He needed the energist



    That bright stone with the pink glow



    He finished the dragon off



    And took out the stone



    She asked him if he was okay



    But he answered in a hostile tone



    “I’m not so bad off that I need a woman to worry about me”



    She slapped him and yelled



    He really didn’t see



    That she was truly worried about him



    She wasn’t dancing with glee



    “Why can’t you at least say ‘thank you’?!”



    He realized his mistake and was going to speak



    But the pillar arrived and carried them away



    Now her friends were left with answers to seek



    She arrived on a strange planet



    The boy by her side



    Wolf-men appeared



    And offered them a ride



    They were taken to Fanelia



    Where he presented the stone



    Everyone was impressed



    As they all gasped



    He had succeeded in his quest



    She was taken to the castle



    She missed her home



    Who should arrive then but an annoying little cat-girl



    Who started to roam



    She took possession of a magical necklace



    And took off like a cat



    But the other was right on her heels



    She wished she had a bat



    Many adventures ensued



    Ones that changed her life



    Her friends were right by her side



    To them fighting was (a) rife



    Problems then came



    Not those of battle but those of love



    As she fell for one guy



    The other was jealous of (Allen)



    As time went by she began to think



    ‘Who’s the angel from my vision?’



    She had no idea that he was near



    She had only been wishin’ he would appear



    Her feelings for Allen began to leave



    As her feelings for Van grew



    But she still didn’t know



    That he was her angel too



    Finally the time came when she would have to part



    By then she knew whom she loved



    She was hoping he felt the same way



    She didn’t want her feelings shoved



    They said their goodbyes



    Her eyes (were) filled with tears



    He looked up at her sadly



    He showed no fears



    “We’ll see each other again, my love.”



    “Do not fret.”



    “I would rather part from you and see you later”



    “Then never to have met.”



    She took in his words of comfort



    And made a promise to the stars



    “I’ll return to him one day.”



    She wouldn’t let there be scars



    And on some days, people claim



    When they’re on their last breath



    They claim to see an angel carrying his love



    Then they sink into death



    The story of an angel and his love



    Is one people love to see



    They’ll never forget how it happened



    Or how it came to be…



    ~Fin~
     
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