Art Should I change my persona? ?_?

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Should I change my persona? ?_?

  1. Yes! You should!

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  2. No! Don't or I'll kill you! O.o

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  3. I don't kno. It's your choice really.

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  1. SerenityX

    SerenityX New Member

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    Well, I've been thinking about changing my persona... However, she will still remain a fox. As always. I love foxes! ^o^ Anyway, now for the state of change... o_O I was thinking of changing her from the way she is now, (I'll post that first, by the way... o_O) to a traditional red fox. I'll post that second.

    I would really like some replies on this. I need a lot of input on this...*sigh*

    Both doodles and SerenityX are (C) Alyssa "SerenityX a.k.a Irvine" Herrin
     

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  2. Lime

    Lime Claude ish MY honey ^.^

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    You know what? I'm really diggin' ( ;P ) the first one. They are both really well done, and both so cute. But, the second one, just seems way too common for a fox. And too ordinary. The first one is very creative, and I like the more mix of colors. However, for the first one. I would change the color of the belt ends I believe ( ? ) -- Tis the yellow. It is much brighter from the rest of the picture, and it is the first thing I noticed. Which, I don't think the first thing you want your viewers to notice is a belt. (; Just my thoughts.

    Awesome job, though!
     
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  3. SerenityX

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    Well, do you think I should just make it so that she can change at will? o_O
     
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  4. Lime

    Lime Claude ish MY honey ^.^

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    That'll do. ;P But, for the sake of the art. I would change it in the picture. :)
     
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    Lol. What do you mean...?_? *is all confused.. o_O
     
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  6. Ciel

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    like Lime, I prefer the white/silver fox. perhaps its because you put more effort into it, but as well, she is different. foxes tend to be reddish anyways. as well, I don't see a belt? but if you let her change her outfit from time to time, maybe draw pictures with and without the belt.
     
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  7. Lime

    Lime Claude ish MY honey ^.^

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    Maybe i'm just seeing things. . . ;P Or. Maybe it isn't a belt. There is something bright and yellow in that picture and I just keep stareing at it. @.x

    Try drawing the first fox in a different pose, with different clothes and such. I bet you'll find that the first one ish better. ^^
     
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    oh belt ends. I see it now! well, if its distracting.. maybe make it a lighter yellow. I find it ok. and I still agree with Lime. your first persona fox is better but I think you have spent time refining her. If you spend more time refining the second red fox, she'd look cool as well. maybe make her an evil sister or something. lol
     
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