Art sketch - characters

Discussion in 'Visual Arts' started by Namiko, Jan 15, 2004.

  1. Namiko

    Namiko New Member

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    Well, another peice of mine, except different series. I kind of changed my style for this series...mostly the nose. Check it out, and please C&C if you have time.

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4717040/

    well, the girl on the right is going to be a new character, me :>
    tell me if theres anything wrong, she doesn't exactly resemble me fully...but its fine.
     
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    Namiko, Jan 15, 2004
  2. Gabrielle

    Gabrielle New Member

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    the gal looks great but the boy looks awkward. mayb his head is too big and his face is too young(like tht of a 5 yr old).
     
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    Gabrielle, Jan 15, 2004
  3. Kain

    Kain Plaything of Doom

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    It's a good drawing. The girl looks cute.
    The hand on the girls shoulder looks a little weird to me. I thought it was a shoulder pad or something. You should of drawn lines on the hand to indecate the fingers and that would of made it look more clear.
    Apart from that keep up the good work. :anime:
     
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    Kain, Jan 15, 2004
  4. thunder dragon

    thunder dragon dragon king

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    the girl looks good but the boy needs wider shoulders & fix the top of his head cuz it looks like icecream cone, or is it that iam hungry:sweat2: ...
     
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    thunder dragon, Jan 15, 2004
  5. gitarooqueen

    gitarooqueen New Member

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    wow you go to deviant art too! we have to talk, my user name is darkrosecryst okay and i like your sketches they are so nice
     
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    gitarooqueen, Jan 15, 2004
  6. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    its good, the guy looks strange but its ok.

    remember to pay more attention to details, like if one eyebrow is different from the other, and a breast is larger than the other too.

    i like her lips :)
     
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    Sen, Jan 15, 2004
  7. Christabel

    Christabel New Member

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    I agree with the rest that the guy is a little strange. But overall it's good.
     
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    Christabel, Jan 16, 2004
  8. Namiko

    Namiko New Member

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    lol, i have a little problem with drawing guys. i dunno how to. as you can notice, the rest of my gallery is girls.
     
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    Namiko, Jan 16, 2004
  9. Namiko

    Namiko New Member

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    another character. shes miko. a requested series by one of my friends. Her arms are a bit weird, fixable, but not going to be fixed immediately. C&C if you want to.

    Sketch Girl
     
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    Namiko, Jan 17, 2004
  10. Tanuki

    Tanuki the wizzard of oz

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    very nicely done. ^^. you should stick her here :anime:
     
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    Tanuki, Jan 17, 2004
  11. Sesshomisao

    Sesshomisao Poison Girl

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    Hey that looks great...but the Guy needs a bit more work...^__^ Keep up the good work...and maybe some color!?

    Misao
     
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    Sesshomisao, Jan 19, 2004
  12. UFOtaku

    UFOtaku Wachu loorkin at?!

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    Geez, that was harsh. You guys are beating her pic down. o_o Good crits, though. Try shading that second girl's body. ^^ I noticed that the clothes and hair were shaded, but not the rest. ^^
     
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    UFOtaku, Jan 19, 2004

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