Fan Art sketch work

Hey this is my first post on boards.jp . Im also on .ie but I came here for the better interest in japanese drawing.

I know this isnt fanart of any kind but this seems this best place for it...

http://members.boards.ie/citizen_erased/csgvfd.gif

Sorry bout the image quality , I dont have a scanner and it was only a rough sketch.

Can you give me honest opinions because Im not doing this to get praised , I wana learn from my mistakes etc...

Cheers,

 

Very interesting...^^

 

Okay , got them traced psp...

http://members.boards.ie/citizen_erased/traced.gif

and here is one coloured in (badly using psp)...

 

its good. ill be honest, you need to fix the eyes there kind of cross eyed and everything is in porportion exept um..... to saw it nicely her upper curves there kind of un natural shaped *cough* every thing else is very good!!!! i like your shading and her knees and very good i like how you did her arms too!!!

 

looks nice! just her face looks a little small, and her eyes are just kinda weird... gomen. her arms, i guess it's suppose to be like that, so i'll just keep quiet. but other than that, it looks good! ^__^

 

Her face is a little small, but everything else is done greatly. Good job man, kudos!

 

Cheers , yeah I see all that stuff looking back at it now.

 

Aye... Ain't it the truth... :anime:

 

Started making her into one of those dress up games cause I'm bored.
Just messing really , i would need to take more time to do it right.
This is what it look likes now. (need flash player 7 to use I think)

 

I like it I like it. It's a great dress up game! :anime:

 

Yawnage , Things do move slowly round here.
It's been updated a wee bit btw...
I really should scrap it and start again , doing it properly , anyone wana help?

 

i think all of them look good but the new one is just better than the rest yeah!*cheers*...*cricket*...um, I'll stop now...:shy: haha