Art Something I'm suddenly very proud of. ^_^

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  1. Stardust Phox

    Stardust Phox Such a Taurean I am!

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    Drew it today, with the help of a picture, of course (I'm not THAT good... and not THAT bad, either! ^_~). Took around fifty minutes. It's Aya and Ceres from Ayashi no Ceres (you may recognize the picture I'm talking about).

    Scanned by Angel of Light's scanner, which is somehow scanning stuff up with more detail than mine. I LOVE this picture! ^__^ It looks inked! (Note: The .PNG file looks a tad darker, but this one's still great. ^^) Constructive criticism accepted, wanted, and appreciated.
     

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  2. MrPig

    MrPig New Member

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    It`s pretty good uh-huh uh-huh

    Looks kinda like you`ve prepped it for CGing? if nope and thats the finished article it could do with some light shading. I wouldnt bother pointing it out mormally, but i just think faces look very 2-D and just a lil bit of grey can make a lot of difference.

    anyways, good job and give us some more ^-^
     
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  3. SaberJ2X

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    I think It looks great :)

    yeah a bit flat but no biggy...

    what bothers me a bit is the chins.,..
    a tad far away from the ears...
    but nothing more..

    awesome drawing stardust
     
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  4. Sen

    Sen Ero-ninja

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    good job! :D

    couple of notes:

    black hair: her breast is not in the right place.

    blonde hair: her neck is way off proportion, way off i'm tellin' ya.

    hope you find it useful, see ya! :anime:
     
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