Creative Writing Starving Soul (Song)

(I wrote this in like ten minutes at school and I thought I would like to put it up. I just made it because I was bored ^_^. I was going to put down what the music is like for me but I didn't have time. I might put it up later.)

"In this night of hallowed glass,"
"I find I'm all alone,"
"I need some help with this feeling,"
"This nightmare of my starving soul!"

"Will somebody help me?!"
"I can't take this anymore,"
"This feeling deep inside me,"
"It rips out my very soul!"

"You can't control me,"
"You don't know me,"
"Your can't find me,"
"But you can hate me!"

"The flow of the Nile upon my skin,"
"Washes thid battered soul,"
"But nothing can save this soul,"
"This starving soul is doomed to the Damned!"

"Will somebody help me?!"
"I can't take this anymore,"
"This feeling deep inside me,"
"It rips out my very soul!"

"You can't control me,"
"You don't know me,"
"Your can't find me,"
"But you can hate me!"

"The flow of the Nile upon my skin,"
"Washes thid battered soul,"
"But nothing can save this soul,"
"This starving soul is doomed to the Damned!"

"This soul of the damned but also of the holy,"
"Walks this immortal path,"
"A soul that's lost to fire and ash,"
"Comes from the Damned!"

"Will somebody help me?!"
"I can't take this anymore,"
"This feeling deep inside me,"
"It rips out my very soul!"

"You can't control me,"
"You don't know me,"
"Your can't find me,"
"But you can hate me!"

"The flow of the Nile upon my skin,"
"Washes thid battered soul,"
"But nothing can save this soul,"
"This starving soul is doomed to the Damned!"

"This soul of the damned but also of the holy,"
"Walks this immortal path,"
"A soul that's lost to fire and ash,"
"Comes from the Damned!"

"This starving soul is doomed to the Damned!"

 

I could imagine this in a KoRn song dear. Truly. Great work, as usaul Lance. I just lurve your poetry. I have found that most people on BJP have very very very good talent.

 

Not bad. What kind of tempo are you looking for?

 

Sorry if I'm not up to date on stuff but what's a tempo?

 

Tempo is the speed it should be played.

I was wondering was this going to be slow, fast, or a mix.

 

Mixed.....