Creative Writing Story Language I made up!

I can't post the story yet, because it's still being amde, but this is an 'ancient' language or tongue that one of the haracters soemtimes speaks in. It's other 7000 years old so no one really knows about it. These are soem basic words and some simple sentences. In the sentences, picture a girl saying it (Ashita to be pacific, that's the character's name) a girl with a high pitched voice. ~_^ Please tell me what you think.

Hi – Naho!
Bye – Lero.
Thanks – Jirogoso
Yes – Ita
No – Kota
Love – Lai
Hate – Uto
Sad – Genji
Mad - Onoho
Moon – Tsuwo
Star – Hodan
Sun – Asawa
Sky – Danto
Day – Asada
Night – Tsuwen
Girl – Rinpa
Boy – Sinpo
Child – Kokopa (girl)
Child – Kokopo (boy)
Children – Kokopopa (both boy and girl)
Adult - Yupa (woman)
Adult – Yupo (Man)
Adults – Yupopa (both men and women)
Baby – Koshiyoshi (no need for feminine or muscline)
Sorry – Shinenso
Pretty – Pairai
Heart – Gikikino
Soul – Tarashi
Fire – Hikitsu
Water – Mikitsu
Sea – Mikiki
Ocean – Mikikiri
Flower – Paimaipa
Stone – Shintopo
Mountain – Shinshinto
One – Cav
Two – Yuyu
Three – Wese
Four – Chogo
Five – Matore
Six – Inen
Seven – Harona
Eight – Otomoto
Nine – Jijiki
Ten – Aho
Eleven – Aho-cav
Tweleve – Aho-Yu
Twenty – Yu-A
Hundred – Aho-ho-zo
Fish – Mikizo
Cat – Neneki
Light – Rayin
Dark – Dayang
Dog – Inolo
Rodent – Demiki
Bird – Danzo
Could – Danwano
Food – Fumihumi
I – Bewo
You – Sewo
Who – Peiwo
Me/My – Tewo
Us/We – Dendenwo
They - Vewo
( So, I love you is Bewo Lai Sewo ~_^)
Human – Gikoyu
Color - Nojikino
Blue – Gishino
Red – Shenhino
Yellow – Mirihono
Green – Dorino
Black – Yangkuno
White – Yinshino
Purple – Daniyuno
Pink – Innoceno
Ornage – Oradenjino
Oh – JIIIIIIIIII!!!! (ji, you say it like some little Japanese 2 yera old girl yelling at the top of her lungs ~_^)
So – Goho
It – Fro
Is – Doe
Get – Zio
Now – Tomi
Hair – Radi
Delicious – Danatanahoto
This – Jesta
Those – Jasta
That – Josta
Make – Yoto
Have – Yenta
Had – Yento
Death/Dead – Shiya
Life/Alive – Shiyi
Used – Hira
To/Too – Se
But – Veri
Friend – Tomochan
Best – Kishi
Let – Yoki
Go – Bai
Some – Ayagi
Music – Lioka
Song – Lalala
Dance – Limipa
Sibling – Koropopa
Sister – Koropa
Brother – Koropo
And – Lazo
Are – Bato
Youngest – Kokono
Oldest – Yuhono
The – Yeza
Am – O
Going/Gonna – Tamiyo
Catch – Abu
Wonder – Dorane
If – Ha
Will – Toto
Any – Ga
Thing – Yenoji
Well – Naki
As – Kimi
Long – Sanho
Mother – Papayu
Father – Popoyu
Breakfast – Mitsfumi
Lunch – Asafumi
Dinner – Tsufumi
Says/Said/Say – Nano
Home – Shita
For – Odi
Before – Odashi
After - Odasho
To make something plural put a chi at the end of the word.
Instead of –ing, put in nil


Now let’s practice some sentences shall we?

Bewo Lai Sewo (I love you)
Bewo Uto Sewo! (I hate you!)
JI! Bewo zio fro tomi! (OH! I get it now!)
Sewo yoto tewo genji. (You make me sad)
Sewo yoto tewo onoho! (You make me mad!)
Sewo yoto tewo goho onoho! (You make me soooooo mad! ~_^)
Jesta doe danatanahoto! (This is delicious!)
Fro doe goho pairai! (It is so pretty!)
Bewo yenta yuyu neneki-chi! (I have 2 cats!)
Bewo hira se yenta wese neneki-chi, veri cav shiya. (I used to have 3 cats but one died)
Yoki dendenwo bai zio ayagi fumihumi! (Let us go get some food!)
Bewo yenta inen koropopa-chi. Chogo koropa-chi lazo yuyu koropo-chi! (I have 6 siblings. 4 sisters and 2 brothers)
Vewo bato Hodango, Nosomi, Yinra, Yangru, Danago lazo Kitono. (They are Hodango, Nosomi, Yinra, Yangru, Danago and Kitono)
Hondango doe yeza kokono. (Hodango is the youngest)
Bewo O yeza Yuhono. (I am the oldest)
Bewo O Ashita. (I am Ashita)
Jesta doe tewo kishi tomochan, Mitsho! (This is my best friend, Mistho!)
Dendenwo bato tamiyo mikizo-nil! (We are going fishing!)
Bewo dorane ha dendenwo toto abu ga yenoji? (I wonder if we’ll catch anything?)
Ji naki, kimi sanho kimi dendenwo bato shita odashi tsufumi, papayu nano. (Oh well, as long as we are home before dinner, mother says.)

The language doesn't even have a name yet. If anyone wants to think up one for me, I will be most grateful. n_n

 

Holly Crapus!

That sweet!

I have a little language but not to much of a vocab...

I have an alphabet I made up though. Ive got it memorized and I can write it fluently.

 

Thanks I was inspired to do this by Tolkien, the writer of Lord of the Rings, he made up Elvish.

I also have a guide of female names from bach then that I amde. Like Ashita means Never Dead (to show the soul will never die) and Hodango (which is my favorite, it means when the stars and sky meet).

Oh, you made a language (well like a language) too? Can I see? Please?

 

Well I kinda lost the vocabulary, its somewhere in that thing I call my room...

Here the alphabet though, it looks bizzar here but written it looks cool (or so I think )

Oh and its not Islandic, its pronouced Jee-slan-DIC, kinda french sounding.

 

COOL!!!!!!!

Tere's an ancient text to go with the lnaguage but I ahven't written it up yet, I'm still working on the vocabulary. making little books like the ones thye made us read in grade one (Sam ctaches fish. Sam brings fish home. Sam is happy. Blah, blah, blah, you get the point.)

 

The language looks a lot like Japanese (or like Korean, since Korean language uses l's and ng's). And did you know that ashita is the Japanese word for "tomorrow"? But it's an interesting concept, to make up your own language.

A good suggestion: come up with suffixes and prefixes as well. You know, to have the effect of adding "-ing" or "-ed" to the end of verbs.

 

Actually for -ing you add -nil and for -ed you add -oyo ~_^

This language was actually inspired GREATLY by Japanese. Hodan for example, Hoshi is star, Hodan is star. Tsuki is moon, so Tsuwo is moon. And Asa is comingly used in gril names for 'Morning' so Sun is Asawa.

Hey I didn't know Ashita meant tommorow! Cool, I just racking my brain for a name for the character and then I thought, well she's an acient so lemme look back at history... and first thing that came to my mind was Ashitaka. He was part of the Ainu clan and that was my original idea but I thought, nah, she needs to be much older so I just took off the ka and I liked how it sounded.

Keke, the male version of Ashita was Ashito. ~_^ O and a are commonly used for femine and musculine, tho, thye are usuaully po and pa in the language. (Papayu is mother, Popoyu is father ~_^)

I actually made this whole thing in an hour, and I've added alot more to it. I've even begun to write some songs in it.

My mom said it sounded Native. @_@ I didn't even intend on that.

 

This should be add a great depth to your story, and I hope to read it if it is to be posted on this site. Just make sure that it is used enough to make a difference of features in the story, but not enough to slow down readers trying to get to the point of the story. You probably already had that in mind though.

 

Thanks, and yeah it would add alot of depth. Tolkien made up Elvish for LotR and how did that end up? Kekeke, with people memorized the language by heart and then going and writing poems in it! I'm serious! I even know a girl in my class, she can write in japanese, she speaks some french (she says it's a boring language tho) and in science class she's like "Hey, Mr. *insert my teacher's name* can I write my homework out in elvish?"
Teacher: NO!
Girl: Can I write this in my own language
Teacher: No for I know you could be saying some thing bad about me!
Friend: Yeah she was like cussing at me before in this whacked up language of hers.
Girl: Oh shut up! Well, cna I write it in another language? Cause I can.
Me: Can I write it in my language?
Teacher: *gets fed up and writes English only on the broad above the assignment. Starts laughing*
Girl: Drats.
Me: Can I still write it in my language? Pretty please?

Lol, and then there's a girl I know on the internet, janelle, or Miakashi, she wrote the Sailor Moon Trilogy and for Sailor Moon Genesis she made up an acient tongue (mine isn't inspired by hers, they sound nothing alike, they have things like Xthanye, blah, blah, oh well, it does take place in the silver millennium)

I wouldn't use too much tho, there's only one character that uses it, and she can barely remember it all, she only spoke it like, 7000 years ago. :dizzy2:

Yay, I'm glad people like the idea. Yay! I'm so happy! n_n

 

Me look...

Well done Fushigi Rockna, i really envy your imagination. One question isnt it gonna be hard to understand what people say in your story because they will use your new language? (do I have to study?)
When do you say you gonna post that story?
Abd didnt you say that you were going to read some of mine too?:sweat2: Cuz me have posted a small story (but the BIG story will of cuz be better...)

 

I know, me gonna read it, me just VERYYYYYYYYY slow with getting to things. ^^;

Actually, only ONE character uses it, well Ruri (not from Nadesico, ~_^) uses it, but that's becaus eshe lived during that time, she was cursed with eternal youth and immortality, at the same time, (it was a punishment). Poor girl. T_T But she's like the spoiled little brat from hell tho. n_n

I'll post it eventually, once I finish the first episode/chapter.

 

Very kewl! If you guys are as interested in languages as I am, you should read Tolkien's biography! I learned some words I didn't even know existed in english so...

Like 'philologist' (yes, it's spelt properly!) is somebody who has interests in language, so hello, you bunch of philologists!

Before I make up my own language, I want to learn at least one root language for each 'sort' of language.

So far, I know English, French, Spanish and a little bit of Japanese (maybe 200 words) and a little bit of Chinese (more like 20 words) and 5 words in Korean . So, I still have a long way to go before creating my own language.

I find your alphabet really interesting, Artemis, and this language is great! I know I have a link to an Elvish-English dictionary here somewhere...^_^ I want to write my homework in elvish!!

 

Actually one hour. Gotta do something when your bro's watching crap cartoons.

Thank you everyone for all the kind words!!!! *blushes*

TOLKIEN RULEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Tbh, Tolkien didn't create a language. Elvish is just a direct translation of English. Doesn't count as a language

 

Grammer, oh god. Tis the only thing that really screwed me up in spanish class. Just keep this line my uncle told me and my cousins, in mind when you sit down to figure out the grammer "Keep it simple stupid!" (I'm not calling anyone here stupid, i'm sure that everyone who reads this will figure that out. But I like to make sure )

 

Ooooooooh, cool language. ^_^ Sounds like so much fun. ^_^