Creative Writing Suggestions.

Okay, I'm curretnly writing a book, but I'm already out of ideas. I have finished the prolouge, but after that, I have no idea. I will post the prolouge and see what you think.

"Where is he?" Seto asked. "We need him. He's the only one who knows how to kill Icaris." he said. Rena looks around. "Over there at the ramen shop." she started running towards him. "Camaris, Camaris." He turns and looks. "Oh, hello. Do I know you?" he asked. "You know me, but not him." she said, pointing at Seto. "Look, you gave me this ring." she said, showing him her outstretched hand. On it was a ring of solid silver with a head of a wolf depicted on its surface. "Oh yes. I remember now. I gave you that ring as a gift when I left. Sorta as a promise that I would come back to you." She blushed, clearly knowing what he meant.
"Enough talk." Seto said hurriedly. "Camaris, your father has escaped and has gone on a rampage. He has already destroyed Osaka and is on his way here, to Kyoto, as we speak. Your help is required in order to stop him." Camaris took a deep breathe while running his fingers through his hair. "I see. Well, this is a problem that you will have to deal with on your own. I have given up fighting." He replied, calmly. Seto looked at him, "But you have to help us. What happened to the great Hitokiri Tenma who defeated his own father and banished him back to hell? Everyone now looks up to you. They expect to see the great Hitokiri Tenma appear to save them from-" Camaris cut him off, "First of all, My name is not Hitokiri Tenma, it's nothing but a cover up so no one knows I am the son of that traitorous basterd. And secondly, if my father does show up, I'll just banish him back to hell where he belongs. I have a hard time believing he can resist."
As he said this, Icaris, his father, showed up. Rena looks at him and says, "I think you may want to rethink your not fighting again." She draws her sword and charges Icaris. He hits her, and she fly’s into a sushi shop, destroying the building. As the dust settles and her vision returns, she attempts to get up. She notices that a beam had fallen from the roof and landed on her legs, preventing her from moving. She tries to lift it off, but it is too heavy for her.
She looks in front of her and sees Icaris standing there, looking at her. "Camaris. Camaris, help me." she screams. She faintly hears Seto yelling at Camaris to help her. She looks at Icaris again and sees him drawing his sword and raise it above his head. She closes her eyes, not wanting to see the instrument of come down upon her. She hear the unmistakable sound of metal against metal. She opens her eyes to see Camaris standing in front of her, sword drawn, blocking his fathers attack. He looks into his fathers eyes and say, "If you ever touch her again, I'll kill you."

Well if you havn't guessed, this is a sequal. Like I said, I'm stuck. I would appreciate any suggestions anyone might have. I'm also trying to figure out a title, if you have any ideas, please let me know.

 

Spelling is pretty good. Grammar needs work. Not sure on what it was orginally written on but generally when another person talks makes a new paragraph. Story is okay thus far.

What suggestions were you looking for?

 

I can't think of a title, and if there is anything that you think I should add, let me know. Yesterday I started the begining of the first chapter, which is pretty much the fight between Camaris and his father. Once it's a little longer, I'll post the first chapter.