Creative Writing The History of Anime-Rate my 'Project'!

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Seishin, Feb 6, 2006.

  1. Seishin

    Seishin Guest

    So I had to work on my Junior Project recently, and today, the 'Final Rough Draft' was due!

    It's apparently on the history of Anime. Let's keep in mind that the teacher knows squat about Anime, and I'm lazy, but it won't change the fact that I researched well the main facts!
    What would you give me if you were my English III teacher?

    -Seishin
     
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  2. Reisti Skalchaste

    Reisti Skalchaste New Member

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    F You fail! XD



    :p

    It's decently done. There's a few grammar errors and such, but all in all it's fairly well done, for American standards. I'd never have been able to write about anime for an essay. XD
     
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  3. Seishin

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    Yesh. Somehow, my Microsoft Word doesn't have the spell check thingy. I wanted to send it to myself on a PM, and get it from school, center it again and such, and fix grammar, but I don't have the time between clases to do that. At least I thought I didn't.

    It's a rough draft, my question is, am I accurate on the History?

    -Seishin
     
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  4. Eternal-Blaze

    Eternal-Blaze New Member

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    As it is now, I would give it a C-. But if you fix the spelling and grammar errors, I would give it an A.

    I'm not one who really knows the storyline of how anime came to be, but didn't the movie Metropolis have an important role?
     
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  5. Orion

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    You don't know how bad I've wanted to do a report on this topic. XD It's good though, if I was a bad person I would totally steal your report.


    >.>




    <.<


    *Steals Seishin's report* :p
     
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  6. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    Hrm...

    I will copy this and move it to creative writing...

    This is, after all, a judgement on your writing skills.

    - Teddz
     
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