Creative Writing the meaning of love....

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  1. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn’t it? It makes you so fragile. It opens your chest and someone, like a girl, can come in and mess with it. You try to show your feelings that you are a friend, building all those defenses, you build a armor. A armor of friendship. But what happens? She does something dumb and breaks your armor, what did she do? She kissed you and then your life isn't the same anymore. Love just takes hostages. It makes you happy in the light, and leaves you sad in the dark with a simple phrase like "maybe we should just be friends" and your heart breaks like a glass . It hurts. It gives you a "get-inside-your-heart-and-rips-you-untill-you-die" pain. It's not an Imagination. It hurts you soul. Don't You love Love?
     
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    Teddz, Dec 28, 2002
  2. Zanza

    Zanza .Net-ing & PHP-ing~*
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    Oh yes I do!!

    *sigh* :sad: this is awesome!! *sniff*
    I can't say anything more, or else I am going to cry :sad:
     
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    Zanza, Dec 28, 2002
  3. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    hehe yeah...love just kills you...:(
     
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    Teddz, Dec 28, 2002
  4. Stardust Phox

    Stardust Phox Such a Taurean I am!

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    Hmm... *taps chin in thought* It has essence, yes. A little spelling/grammar work would be good, but it really does speak.

    *gasp* I know! ^_^ You could, like, make a longer-ish essay-ish-type thing out of this. It really does speak, y'know? Nice job!
     
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    Stardust Phox, Dec 29, 2002
  5. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    hehe...thanks for all those advices....well, i'm gonna try and do a longer version...:)
     
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    Teddz, Dec 29, 2002
  6. Hikaru

    Hikaru New Member

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    that was good, Teddz!

    Remember to come share that version with us.
     
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    Hikaru, Dec 30, 2002
  7. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    I've been thinking of making a more "sadder" version...like...depression and pain...and suddenly it turns into something wonderful...

    lol that didn't sound right :D
     
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    Teddz, Dec 30, 2002
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    thats so true.
    *sniff
    :D :D :D
    thats real good
     
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    blood_pheonix, Jan 1, 2003
  9. Mika-chan

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    it is true... scary, but true...
     
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    Mika-chan, Jan 3, 2003
  10. Teddz

    Teddz Sexy Swedish Love ♥

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    Ladies and gentlemen! I did a new one! :D

    Check it out..made it a new thread...it was a little TOO long :D

    enjoy :)
     
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    Teddz, Jan 11, 2003
  11. Sebastien

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    It was sad.. But True Im Going To Read The Second One Right Now ^_^
     
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    Sebastien, Jan 23, 2003

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