RPG Archives Tokyo Wave Dementions: sister thread

story line: in the year 2012 an earth NASA ship crashed in to a small black hole witch slowly developed in to a worm hole then in an other galexy a space outlaw named Char & his robot companion an other alians on his ship at the time crash into the hole and were teloported strait to tokyo in the year 2020 and met a human named as Mako who is merly a child stuck in the middle of this , the problem is that thay cannot get back to there home plannet because there ship was destroyed when thay arived on earth and also,space polece"i know i spelled it wronge" , bownty hunters,and alians that
think the captor'spelled wronge i know" of Char would do wonders for there life.......


if you want to make a character for this RPG then describe it this way

Name:
Age:
Race"asin if its human or a type of aleian":
planet"if it is an alean":
sex:
any atributes it may have on its body:
special abilitys:
weekness"an elimental weekness or what thay are afraid of":
wepons "if any":
other"a dicription of the character in anyother way you want to discribe or the characters background story or what ever":

 

heres Chars discription


Name: Char "duh"
Age:21
Race: evalutionary alean
Planet: Zain
Sex: Male
atributes: cat ears and a cats tail
abilitys: jumping up to 15 feet high,very good hearing,and telaporting
weekness:water,and rubbing his ears :catgirl:
wepons:energy sword,and energy hand gun
other:Char is a space outlaw who was stelling jems from a planet when people who were on the planet walked by, so he would not get coult stelling he convinced them to go on a tour or there univers and thats when thay crash into the trance portation hole to tokyo.



heres the robots

Name:B.O.T.Z.
Age:1month
Race:A.I. robot
planet: an space senter laboritory
Sex: Maleish
atributes: no mouth,and lots ov armore
abilites:absorbtion of energy, normal human strength,self repare"but it dose take a wiel to work",and his arm can chage into a small cannon
weekness:water,to much energy absorbed
wepons: an energy hand gun
other:he was an A.I. ment to kill Char but ended up saving his life and then
making the choice of becoming Chars partener in crime


and heres makos Bio
name:Mako inowa
Age:12
Race: an evolutionary human
Planet:Earth "duh"
sex:Male
atributes:hes got green hair and green eyes
abilitys:cannot be afected by lazer guns
weekness:is a bit of a scarddy cat and bones a week
wepons:none
other:Mako is a 12 year old boy who lost his parents and dos not go to school,but is incredibaly"spelled wrong"smart he was walking in da woods when he saw a flash of light about 10 feet ahead and then a busted up ship and manny people that are a little strange..........

 

i think you need more of a description of the Storyline, characters, and of the whole thing overall (like more detail of surroundings and the kind of characters you want to see) if you want people to join /b/c it is very confusing right as to what the hole storyline is.... :sweat2:

 

*coughs* I agree with Hiro.......the backround is a little choppy.....not counting spelling errors which makes it hard to understand....I saw one word, Alien, spelled wrong in two different ways..... And thats not the only spelling error..

 

I'll give you three posts with which to rewrite your opener so the english isn't a garbled mess and the plotline is more clear. If I am not pleased, this rpg will be toast.

 

so what spelling problems im not good at spelling but i know the back ground is a little bad but im doing the best i can ill change it a little if i can

 

I know one!!

Name:Zamercian (Zamess)
Age:23
Race"asin if its human or a type of alien":demon/dragon half unknown human.
planet"if it is an alean"lanet Surfarus (full of aliens and humans)
sex:M
any atributes it may have on its body: some scales on it's body half on his face and metal claws.
special abilitys:telekinesis,drains off of aliens and humans knowlenge,mulitask,regenerates automatic (full life, when he dies), has warlocks magic, can transform into any living thing.
weekness:Ice and blizzards
wepons: Gun blade and a multiples of samurai three blade swords.
has black long hair,left eye blue and right eye gray, he's about 6'0 foot,weights about 178 lbs.skin tone is half white and green from his scales. I would discribe more but that wasn't the point...anyways I hope you like my character.

 

O kewl my first one

Name: Dawnian
age: 17
race: half human and half pheonix
sex: F
any attributes: wings of gold and humna body I guess on that one
specail abbilities: cannot be peirced on her wings or any place on her back, can suck your soul out with a single glare of her eyes, can make gold and riches out of dirt...(what)?
weakness: thunder and lighting, holy magic
weapons: wings that can peirce a human or any aliens flesh without protection, twin blades in each hand, evil magic from her soul and necklace around her neck
other: Red hair straight at the front with her bangs and flipped out in the back, 127ibs,wings that shoot out from her lower back

 

ok we need at least one more person to if we want to start the RP...so will anyone jion

 

Name: Kiki

Age: 17

Race: half human with cat features

Sex: Female

Attributes: She is fast moving, has very good hearing and has great skills with her sword.

Appearance: Kiki

her cat features: she has smallish black ears that poke out from her white hair. She has a black tail (not in the pic), her nails are kept long and sharp and she has some sharp front teeth.

Personality: She is nice girl who doesnt want to get in the middle of things. She is open minded and will try just about anything. She can get though when things look bad and she hates to loose and feel weak.

 

ok tokyo wave has started but if you want to make a character go ahead and
do it and come in were we are thats the point of my RP anything can happen
and what ever dose will change the story line it all just depends on your actions :catgirl:

 

Where'd my post go? I came back to edit it and it's gone!

 

I didnt do it...But hey whoevers turn it is needs to take it. Its been two days
Okay dokie ppl. Bye bye

 

I told you to rewrite the story so there was a clear idea. I gave you three posts to do it in.

Thread closed until you can PM me a more properly written setting.