Creative Writing Transformation

Transformation

Darkness potruding from your heart,
The evil magic begins to start.
It seduces your mind and warps your skin,
Your voice barly heard in the midnight din.

You can't hold back from this terrible treason,
Your mind lost to all words of reason.
The power tricks your mind with words of caress,
Revealing to you your lasting finess.

Your mind begins to open like petals on a flower,
And you relise the possibilities of your superior power.
The lust for blood is on your tongue,
This craving is lasting and cannot be rung.

This thing is inevitable and you must submit,
This is what you choose and you must commit.
Yor mind becomes a hazy blur,
You wonder if your sanity is secure.

The transformation is complete,
Your new vampiric body deserves a treat.

Well,It's not my best work(it took me about twenty minutes)but it's the best one that I've submmited yet...

 

Demonicness is so hawt! That was wicked awesome! Hehh eh

 

i agree with hazel. quote: 'That was wicked awesome!' /unquote.

heh. but it was real good! ^________^

 

i really liked it. if that only took you twenty minutes imangine what you could write if you thoght for about an hour or so ahead of writing.