Creative Writing true love

I don't know why, but I seem to always write from a guys perspective.Kinda weird since I'm a girl. :catgirl:

The lips of the one who sings so fair,
Brushes your brow in the midnight air.
You yearn for the one with golden eyes,
As you hold her under midnight skies.

Her slender frame, her velvet hair,
which hold absolute perfection, makes you stare.
Her long and soft hands touch you face,
As you grasp each other in a passionate embrace.


She holds on to you, as you untie her hair,
You croon in her ear, tell her that you care.
She looks at you with an angelic face,
Her love coming at a rapid pace.

This is the night for the two of you,
One that is given to so few.
She is yours and you will never give her away,
Together you will be, until the very last day.

It's my first time doing a love poem, so cut me some slack (please?)

 

It is okay I guess. Probably something you dream of. Plus you are a girl. I know a lot of guys that have no romance in them.

 

it's most likely because you are a girl that your able to write from a boys point of view.

i liked it.