Art Two drawings in one sitting?

I think its good. Just that maybe the torso is a littlebit too big ? and the shadow looks a bit weird. Also a backround would make miracles to the pic

 

Heh. pretty good. Yea, the torso is just a bit too big, and the shadowing could use a bit of work. Background! all pics need at LEAST a horizon line! ^^

//EDIT// oh, oops, forgot some things. The feet are just a bit too small, but they are hard to draw. Also, the hand that is behind his leg... Well, it sort of looks like it dissapears. like he has no arm/hand beyond that point. :sweat2: //EDIT//

 

looks great cialy love the form, i mean its like an imagenable pose which is great!!! :anime:

 

good picture, all you need to do is fix the shadow and make the torso smaller and it would be great! Sorry for being a critic...

 

it looks good, but anyway keep on practice!

 

u'r gonna make the shadow in front of him?
Ummm. i might be wrong but doesn't the white dots on the pupils mean that theres coming light from the front. So maybe u should make it behind him ? ..just a question/suqqestion. I'm gonna shut up now before i get an axe on my skull

 

I think by his left leg should be a bit of shadow no? or some thing comming off in that general direction.