Art two pairs of wings

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  1. makurayami

    makurayami New Member

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    Okay, she's my first image that I have ever colored on a computer. Uh... Yeah, I know the lines need more work, I was so excited to scan the picture that I didn't ink it first! :sweat2:
     

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  2. seraphinx

    seraphinx Oy, Artista!

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    It's pretty good, and I'd say you didn't need to ink it in the first place. (Of course, I almost never ink my drawings, even for scanning and CGing.) Maybe you could've smoothed out the sharp angle on her upper left wing, and that would've softened out her shape more. I like the design of her clothing on her torso.
     
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  3. UFOtaku

    UFOtaku Wachu loorkin at?!

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    I love how you colored the hair! XD As far as fixing it, you could maybe make legs wider? I think the lines are fine, too. ^^
     
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  4. makurayami

    makurayami New Member

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    Hmm...Good point, well anyways, does anyone how you ink lines on the computer?
     
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  5. Ciel

    Ciel Unoa Freak
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    its really cute ^__^ as for inking on the computer, not sure. there is an ink brush perhaps or any paint brush. but I don't know if u have a tablet or are just using your mouse. I'm mouse challenged.. lol. anyways UFO said to make the legs wider, and with more curves. study legs and see. work on your feet as well. With the whole image in mind, I love her hair, and the colours you chose and her pose good job ;)
     
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