Creative Writing Untitled 5-29-05

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Engel, May 29, 2005.

  1. Engel

    Engel New Member

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    I have no emotions
    I have nothing to fear
    I choose not to love, but only full content

    My solemn eyes will forever be
    Set me free, away from this agony

    The friendship may last, the lovers will part
    I only wish for happiness, together in eternal bonds
    The secrecy will reveal themselves, no more tears to shed

    Love me always, forever till the end
    I am sorry for the pain that I have caused
    I am sorry for the many denials

    Forgive me please, send me love, send me joy
    Wish me happiness, as I will for you always
     
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  2. Peachy

    Peachy ☆liberal HMod☮

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    Beautiful as usaul Sakuma-San..I love it!! :D
     
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  3. Engel

    Engel New Member

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    Thaaankies. ^_^
     
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  4. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    I like. Keep it up.
     
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  5. Nightmare

    Nightmare Chaos Rules

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    nice i think i may just start doing some poems of my own :D
     
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  6. Engel

    Engel New Member

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    Huzzah for inspiration! ^_^
     
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