Creative Writing What do you think of my poem...?

I am

I am hope, coming and going in many forms.
Like a snake, I lay waiting to strike,
large and overwhelming.
I am 12, I have seen everything,
have I really seen anything at all?
I am blue, like the great ocean, sapphire and gentle.
I am the water of the sea,
never knowing what form to take.
Grasp me if you can.

Adam Lamb

I wrote it my self...

 

i just wanna say nice poem there bounty_hunter26,
it is really cool just readin like the first 2 verse made me wanna read more..it is interesting..i would read it again!!

 

Hey man, thanks a ton, I one day just decided to write that and then... what do u know... im a poet!!! Isnt that awsome guys?

 

well i just wanna say i hope you can bring up more poetry here cause i liek to read and i liked yours so atleast try to post one up again if you have one..thx alot..see you around

 

I really liked it too... very good, looking forward to seeing more from you.

 

Well... Red, you have seen like all my poetry...

And yeah... im thinking of putting more up.

 

Hey Bounty,

That was a very well-written piece of work. I really hope you plan on putting more of your work here for the reading.

You should think about putting your work together for the masses.

VM

 

its awesome man... i wish i had those kind of skills

i am a banana
a round yellow banana
peel me
eat me
poo me out
i am a banana

OH YEA!

 

O yes... that is pure skill there!!!!!!!!! I think you could make a living with that skill!!!! *cheesily clears his throught*