Creative Writing when people look at me..

This is a very emo poem. Its for all the people who put down people who have it bad, and cry once in awhile..and sometimes whine when they can't take it any more..gosh some people really need to grow up. WE'RE HUMAN!

How come when people look at me?
Ignorance is all they see?
they say all i do is cry and whine about pain..
when i hide ALL my tears in rain..
People won't listen I try to explain
all their expressions are still the same
Not one time in my life, no matter how i hurt
have i never said no one has it worse
I really do try to strong..i really try
but people think im weak whenever i start to cry
The world wonders why everyone is dying
when you can't even help when someones crying
walk one day in my shoes
go through what some of us have to go through..
and say you could take it
and everyday you could make it
just going to school and making it home
and praying to go you'll be alone
don't dwell on the past..thats all they ever say
could you forget something that happened everyday?

 

Man that is amazing you really bring out truth in your poems that's a goodin keep it up

 

I still hate Emo...

^^ But the poem is really well done. Grats, that's an awesome piece of artwork right there.

~W

 

*HUGS*

I know that feeling. Don't worry, there are people willing to accept you and care for you

 

Ahh thats good. I never liked emo but I like this. I know how you feel, you just summed it up in a beautiful poem, good job.

 

To start, lemme just say HOORAY FOR EMO!!! Now that that's over with, GREAT POEM. I dabble a little on my own, it's been coming out like this a lot. I can only get creative when I'm really sad or lonely (which is many more times than I would like). You have my simpathy, *~Blue~*.

 

eww...emo... I hate emo but this poem expresses a lot of emotions that are true in this world. Great Job keep it up.

 

god man that was just...WOW keep it up id love to hear some of your other work if you have anymore please send me them

 

I really like this, actually....as everyone else has said, there's a lot of truth in it. Very nice, Blue =)

 

thanks guys ^_- this is the most replies ive ever had. AND I figured everyone would pick on me about being emO thanks again..

 

Can't believe I missed this one.

The good: Wither it is emo or not to me it doesn't matter. This poem shows different aspects to a certain emotion which is nice to see. It was well written.

The bad: I noticed at least one time some words were stretched in order to rhyme I personally hate that.