Art WIP, crittisism please, please please ^_^

Hi, I know Im not here much and rarely post now days. But there good reason. PC is bad, job hunting, and artwork.

ok, so I have a new lineart, that I really really want some C&C on. I have my ideas of what the picture means, as its a influenced peice. But Id love to know what you guys think it means.

as for a name for the picture I though Bitter-Sweet Sadness would fit due to what I think it means. But suggestions are more than welcome.

I hardly get any C&C, everyone just say "ohh thats nice" and doesnt critisise it. I would really really appreciate some c&c please please pretty please ^_^.

Oh I plan to CG this one with my new tablet, but that may be ages as my pc need upgrade RAM is too bad. And I getting used to my tablet. Its hard o.o.

Top hat girl

Thanks guys it really appreciated

 

wow
i think that is really good
i think it means something sad or despair or ending
My thoughtd:
i think that some of the lines that are lighter could be erased
just my thought

 

It's sort of tough to see the entire picture at first, and I honestly find the face to be a little bit more masculine than feminine. Gorgeous though - can't wait to see it coloured.

 

Really cool idea. I like it alot. Creepy and cool. Like Meaikoh said, its hard to look at, at first, or hard to see. I thought that the hair made it look more masculine, I dont think that face looks too masculine. I think it will look really sweet when its colored! Can't wait to see it.

 

i think i'm gonna be haunted. it's a really good pic!