Creative Writing Add On To This, Please?

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Mika-chan, Nov 27, 2002.

  1. Bau

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    "not cinaminne buns" a little kid colapsed infront of them. "there pure....E...Evil." the kid died.
     
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  2. *Sasami*

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    .......They were actually two weird shaped diamonds, one red and the other was blue. The blue diamond resembled the color of Spencer's eyes,which Natalie found it to be very erie.........
     
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  3. Little Washu

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    Natalie looked at Spencer and noticed that there was a smirk accross his face and she wondered if the symbols on his shirt really were pure evil..........
     
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  4. k0gepan

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    Then her insecurity came to life, and she wondered if he was smirking at the excess hair on her upper lip. But, no, that couldn't be it. Suddenly, the logo began to glow as she stared at it. She backed up in fear and.....
     
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  5. Mika-chan

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    formed an energy blade in her hands. "What are you???"
     
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    Spencers eyes began to glow red.

    "I................ am Bob."
     
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  7. Mika-chan

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    natalie looked at him weirdly. "BOB? What the hell?"
     
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  8. Nephilim_X

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    Spencer wondered what was going on. Little did he know that Natalie suffered from visual and aural hallucinations. But, he decided...
     
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  9. Mika-chan

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    ...To play along. "....Yes, I am Bob."
     
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  10. Nephilim_X

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    "AH HA! I KNEW IT!" Natalie shouted. "IM ON TO YOU!" She laughed madly, then, collapsed. Spencer caught her before she hit. Cute, but a little nutty. "Ah well. Its not like I'd meet two other nutty girls today. That'd be like some really bad fiction based off of romantic comedy. Hey, whats that sound?"
     
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  11. Little Washu

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    ............" I don't know, it sounds like wings"..................................
     
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  12. Mika-chan

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    A boy with blue-ish hair walked up behind him.
     
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  13. Hikaru

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    "I need your help, both of you. I have come to deliver a message." Suspiciously, and still not over her hallucination, Natalie...
     
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    Slaps the boy across the face causing him to fall to his knees as he starts so sob...
     
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  15. artemis836

    artemis836 Vampire Slayer

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    ...tears of blood instead of saltwater. He screams...
     
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  16. k0gepan

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    "HOW COULD YOU??!?! I CAME TO TELL YOU YOU'VE WON A BILLION DOLLARS FOR EVERY WEEK THAT YOU LIVE!! THE ONLY CONDITION WAS THAT YOU DIDN'T HAVE ANY PHYSICAL CONTACT WITH ME!!! HOOOW COUUUULD YOUUU??!"...he turned sharply on his heel, and, blue hair gleaming, he grew wings and leapt through the window *smash* flying away into infinity and beyond. "well...." Natalie said. "that was...."
     
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  17. Nephilim_X

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    "impossible. Your head and my hand are both made of metal with opposite magnetic charges. They attract." The boy...
     
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  18. Mika-chan

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    Halts in mid air. "Really? So you ARE the one I've been searching for?"
     
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  19. Hikaru

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    Spencer stepped up between Natalie and the blue-haired-winged-boy. Though confused, he cleared his throat and said..
     
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  20. Nephilim_X

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    "Would someone please explain to me what is going on?" Natalie laughed. "Of course! I'm from..."
     
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