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  1. Alien_Sacrifice

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    "An alternate deminsion...I've come here in seek of a rare orb that is planted somewhere in this building. The fate of the world rests on my finding this orb. You see the orb..."
     
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    " is a tear-drop from a high elf." Natalie smirked. "Thats...
     
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    a powerful thing to be possessed by any other kind of race." Spencer could only blink. Natalie turned again to the boy. "Now what is it that you want from me?"
     
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    "Oh I just wanted a cup of sugar and...
     
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    *Slap* The boy strikes Natalie across the face. "...I wanted to return you the favor of hitting me." Nataile stand there is shock holding her face. Then Spencer get's between them and...
     
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    .......Kisses Nataile!
     
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    Natalie steps back in shoke, holding her hand on her lips as she stares at Spencer. The Blue Hair boy grabs Spencer and slams him against the lockers. And Shouts..."
     
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    "Hey! Stay away from her! That is, if you wish to live!'the boy with blue hair growls at spencer protectively.
     
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    Spencer camly lays his hand onto the Blue Haired boys chest and a force of energy blasts from his palm slaming the blue haired boy against the lockers on the other side of the hall. Nataile...
     
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    ...shreiks loudly in a high pitch. The boy with blue hair slides to the ground almost unconscious. Nataile runs over to him, yelling "RAICHYTE!!!!....
     
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    Spencer walks up to Natalie and grabs her by the arm. "Come on, were going!" "No!" Natalie shouts as she struggles to get free, but to no avail as Spencer has a strong grip. "Stop struggling!" Spencer yells in a pissed off tone as he drags her outside...
     
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    Natalie begins to sob. "What are you doing??? Let me go!!!!"
     
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    Spencer looked at her and grinned.

    "We're going to see the Muffin Man."
     
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    "the... t-the Muffin Man???? Why?"
     
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    "Oh! Wouldnt you like to know!"
     
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    Spencer continues to drag Natalie as she struggles to free herself. Then Raichye bursts through the doors, jumping into the air using his wings to swoop down and grab Natalie. He starts to fly away with her...
     
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    and Natalie looks back down at Spencer glaring up at them. He's raising his hand again, and Raichyte suddenly swerves off to the side. "Hang on," he yelled. "We're about to...
     
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    Hikaru, Dec 5, 2002
  18. Vegito_luver

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    "...go through a dimensional portal of time back to..."
     
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    ......An unknown Univers.............
     
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  20. Vegito_luver

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    "...where we'll be safe."

    "Safe from what?" asked Natalie, "And why?"

    Raichyte paused. "You need to know..."
     
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