Creative Writing My FF7 Fan Fic

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Gohan_Darkmoor, May 10, 2003.

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How was this Beginning?

  1. A retarded Monkey whos been bashed in the head with a baseball bat could write better!!!

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  2. Decent.....

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  3. Sounds Good, but Needs work

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  4. Good!!! Keep going as is, and it'll be great ^.^

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  5. wtf is Final Fantasy Seven? Who Are you? You gotta be crazy!!! *goes and eats an apple*

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  1. Gohan_Darkmoor

    Gohan_Darkmoor New Member

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    I just wrote the beginning of a FF7 fan fic and was wondering what you guys think of it (mind you, I just started). I'd gladly take any suggestions/critisicm.

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    Gohan_Darkmoor, May 10, 2003
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    Gohan_Darkmoor New Member

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    Any comments? Anyone???? If anyone shows interest, perhaps i'll post more of it once it gets further along.
     
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    Gohan_Darkmoor, May 10, 2003
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    its alittle...um...screwed up~

    screwed up as in...well the text is all mixed up and stuff
     
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    Gohan_Darkmoor New Member

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    Did you open it with Notepad???? if you did, then it would do that. Open it with Wordpad. But thx for the comment Solo!!! ^.^
     
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    Gohan_Darkmoor, May 11, 2003

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