Art Newbie's Art, take a peek pleease

wow. thats really pritty nice! and i cant wait to see the revised version.
but can i offer two notes of criticism:
uno: the hips are too small, in comparision to the rest of the body, or at least they appear that way..
dose: maybe theyre is too much of a downward slope on the shoulders..
..please dont take offense to what i have said. its not ment to be cruel critism but helpful. im not saying in antway to change it either, it is a very nice drawing and you have talent. congrats.

*heart* rei

 

Hey thats pretty a good drawing Great Job ^

 

Coming soon

I will soon be adding some new art to this topic, it is the newest piece I have done, I am just waiting for my friend to fix his scanner so that I can scan my picture. So coming soon will be my newest pic, a self portrait, I glamourized myself though!? I had too..I can't draw myself how I really see myself of else everyone would cry!

 

A self portrait!Never thought of that much.When I do,my portrait always makes me seem retarded.:dizzy2: .lol.

 

Well the self portrait is as of so far the best picture I've ever drawn.. it is way to pretty to be me but that's ok, I'll live, it's a good pic though even though it's not true to what I actually look like. Well it sorta is.. but not completely.

 

im late again arrr, anyway Kat that looks very good, better then any thing i can draw ~_~ keep it up, oh and if u can post some more of your drawings i like them and wanna see more of them, if u dont mind

 

I'm working on getting more scanned right now, and am putting them onto my website, slowly but they're getting there eventually. I will post as fast as possible, and thank you Kyo, your too kind.

 

We can't wait to see more! ^.^ Good job! you are so talented!

 

Heres one of my scanned doodles. Hope you like


http://www.boards.ie/members/elmarco/FemaleManga1.jpg

 

Also

http://www.boards.ie/members/elmarco/MangaF.jpg

 

Very nice! I have one suggestion however, make sure your pupils are in the proper spots so that you get the sense that the person is looking at something, it will help if you can feel it, then we'll be able to as well, just a suggestion. It really does look great though, I love your style.

 

I also can't see it!!! WAHHHH!!!! I wanna see...something's wrong with my computer!!! Poor me...