Creative Writing Poetry Contest

Discussion in 'Written Arts' started by Basher, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Challenge write a poem in 30 minutes. Any style and it can be about anything this is all welcome for this challenge. I felt like doing a rhyme scheme just because it is hardier and makes me work more.

    It really isn't a contest there will be no prize awarded. It is just for fun. Plus it will help any up and coming M2A writers to set deadlines. I hate deadlines but if you want to really write then a deadline is needed. With this poem I am actually going to start writing again. I have stopped for months.

    To me it was actually fun writing a poem in thirty minutes. It is a little cheesey but I still like it.

    Here is my poem.

    For my Son

    I will never doubt you
    For all the things you do
    I will always be there
    Because I care for you

    I will never get angry or yell
    I will never tell you to go to hell
    This is all because I do care
    I love you and you can always tell

    I will never scream
    I will never destroy your dreams
    With all these things I have a dare
    That we hopefully always be a team
     
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  2. Novus

    Novus Gone

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    Ach! I'll go one up and just right a poem as fast as I can!


    I Must Go On
    For years I ran
    In denial of the past
    But since it began
    I knew I could not last
    Giving in, I caved
    Kind of sold out
    Could not be saved
    Lost what I was about
    What is the reason
    To what I do
    Like mental treason
    'Cause I betrayed myself too
    I don't know why
    I'm falling down
    Spirits not high
    Instead they drown
    Although my mind ails
    I know inside
    I must not fail
    For too much rides
    On what I do today
    Failure's not an option
    Can't make this go away
    For the end has begun
    Now as my mind aches
    And all ambition's gone
    Too high are the stakes
    And so, I must go on

    Kind of self-depressing, but written in the space of 10 minutes or so. Take that.
     
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  3. Basher

    Basher Mad Writing Skillz

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    Figures try to add a little fun then someone goes and makes it a competition. Sure I will take that and do it in less.

    Forgiveness

    Should I forgive you?
    For all the pain you caused
    Shall I forgive you?
    For all the tears you brought
    Could I forgive you?
    For all the mistakes you made
    Must I forgive you?
    For all the wrongs you've done
    Will I forgive you?
    For the time I wasted on you
    Did I forgive you?
    For the hurt you did to me
    Can I forgive you?
    For the trouble you found
    I will forgive you when I do
    It may be childish to you
    But at least I still talk to you

    Done in three minutes. :p

    We should all just have fun with it now. Even though I liked how I did that one.

    Just have fun with it. 30 minutes or less.
     
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  4. Raven

    Raven Fuhrer

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    Okay here we go!


    Destiny

    I have lived for thousands of years
    older than gods, older than mountains, older than suns
    I am blind yet I see all
    Nothing can escape me
    I am tallest to mortal eyes

    I have always been here
    But many times gone unnoticed
    My home is a laberinth
    always changing and never ending
    Just like me

    I have seen the chains of Heaven
    And the roses of Hell
    I have been here since the begining
    and will be here at the end
    For I will never die

    I am Endless


    That was inspired by Destiny of the Endless from the Sandman chronicles. Hope you liked it. I did it in less than 10 minutes.
     
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  5. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Hooray for Haiku!

    Gaea

    She sits in forests,
    Seeing the Eternity Cycles,
    weeping tears of joy.
     
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  6. Novus

    Novus Gone

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    Okay, I can't beat three minutes. But I can TRY!

    Futility
    Mist clouds my view
    All around, I look
    But I see nothing
    I step forward
    But I stumble
    Falling down
    Something hard
    Jabs my side
    Hits my face
    I try to arise
    But lack the strength
    There is nothing left
    I feel it now
    Reaching down
    A hand outstretched
    Pulls me again to my feet
    So I can fall again

    Elapsed time: 4 min, 38 sec. I didn't think I could do a 3-minuter. You win this round!
    More of my self-depressed stuff ... I guess to write that quickly I have to tap into real emotion, and I'm just not in a happy place this week.
     
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  7. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Uhhh... you had 30 minutes. Three. Zero.:p
     
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  8. Novus

    Novus Gone

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    I was trying to beat Basher19's record. Read other people's posts before attacking mine, por favor.
     
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  9. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    You could always write haiku, or two haiku! Or more!:D
     
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  10. Novus

    Novus Gone

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    Yeah, but haiku are kind of cheap because they're so short. I mean, I might as well write a rhyming couplet, or even a limerick. I'd rather write something I put thought into, even if it's something I scramble up in a couple minutes. I mean, I could probably average 2 haiku/minute if I really tried. Not to say I'm going to.
     
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  11. Baphijmm

    Baphijmm Kunlun Knight

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    There once was a guy from San Fran
    Whose wife used to look like a man
    She met her new hubbie
    Who's real short and stubby
    Now she shaves as much as she can.

    I tried. It's decent. Maybe two-thirty time-wise. Not bad.
     
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  12. Raven

    Raven Fuhrer

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    Huzzah for limericks!:D
     
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  13. femme_fatale

    femme_fatale New Member

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    I actually have to write some poems for class, so I'm glad I found this now. It will have more to it if I choose to use it for class since it needs to be longer for my assignment (it's hard to keep it interesting for 100 lines).


    The Line

    Don't forget, she said
    Don't forget about the thin little line
    That separates flesh from ash
    Don't forget where you came from
    Or it will be too easy to destroy it

    He destroyed it
    When he looked into her eyes
    The shimmer of blue foil
    Wrapped his hands around her neck
    Not the usual caress

    And squeezed the life away

    Now he sits and stares at the sky
    Blue like her eyes
    Empty like her flesh
    From which the soul has flown

    He erased the line for her

    Ashes to ashes, dust to dust
     
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  14. Nephilim_X

    Nephilim_X New Member

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    Seraquiel

    Lets raise our cup, most treasured friend,
    to love that'll never be,
    Let's hide our tears in ale steins,
    and love eternally.

    Lets hide our fears 'mongst the cannon flame,
    our breath cut short by them,
    Our last gasping breaths dedicated,
    to that final requiem.

    There's a light in your eyes,
    what is the cause, my love?
    Have you found peace at last?
    That shining spiritual dove?

    I can't go with you, no I can't,
    I've things I've yet to do,
    I wish I could, however,
    and in this my word be true.

    Our hearts are filled with bittersweet thoughts,
    bleeding like spiritual ticks,
    and our souls are pained yet joyful things,
    a blazing, screaming phoenix.

    You slip away now...
    this plane of life you've left,
    and yet despite my sadness,
    of love I'm not bereft.
     
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  15. Raven

    Raven Fuhrer

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    In mythic past we live beneath
    From the depths they rise,
    above, to liquid skies.

    The Black the First did leave behind,
    For vast and beautiful Blue
    But that, in time, be ended too

    For upon the hardened shell above,
    Baked and bare, there shall appear another
    Arm and leg, in likeness a brother

    But different in telling ways
    In youth they coat their crust
    They use and burn with murder's lust

    When all is gone they will progress,
    They shall seek to fill the hollow sky,
    Full and starved then turn to blue with hungered eyes.

    In the light of vengence and weapons old,
    An alliance made, of born a lie,
    To drown the the liquid and parch the dry
     
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  16. Vicious

    Vicious Revolution...Revolucion!

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    This one has no title...

    My hand breaks through the crusted ground,
    my mind knowing that a better world is bound,
    my eyes are to see the whole world
    my legs to walk through land and sea,
    Fate and destiny wont tell me but here is where i should be.
    Somewhere else........

    I think its pretty (blah) in my opinion
     
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  17. Novus

    Novus Gone

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    Mindraped

    por que es el cielo rojo
    es porque te odio
    cuando estoy contigo
    la muerte es mi deseo

    Los palabras me dices
    No significan nada


    BLOODY ****ING HELL!

    I actually wrote this on Thursday. I was trying to write something in Spanish, and just ended up with a really bad headache. Took me about twenty minutes. Writing in a second language is hard ...
     
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  18. Rek

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    "Nothig Else Will Change"
    By: Harbinger Of Nothing (Thats Me...)

    Well, I saw what seemed like the end....
    But, t'was the begining of a new chapter
    Its different now that im polinating
    Ive yet to see this face again...
    The mirror's become too tainted with what seems like blood...
    No, too dark to mimic our radiant life blood

    I fade away
    As my eyes stay fused, to the eternal cracks
    A screaming portrayed of self-distaint and.....nothing
    All at once....

    It paved the way for my return to this land...
    Plagued with frozen dreams and distilled visions

    Father, tell me....
    Where does one hide...
    When all that he feels inside....
    Plagues him from behind?

    And breathe into me....
    These sins of my beloved no one....

    So, as I sit, trying to conjure poetry...
    Sad like Christmas cloaked in rain....
    Nothing changes....


    .....Dedicated to every man,women,or goldfish who's never been there for me...
     
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  19. Meaikoh

    Meaikoh See you later, Moderator

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    I Accept This Challenge!

    Title: Soupe À La Crème De Choufleur
    Author: Jessica Rose Marcotte (a.k.a MT)


    Every day I rise again.
    My honour, very life to defend.
    Should one blow go awry,
    If one slash goes unchecked,
    There goes the balance thrown.

    If there is need for battle,
    Let there be need for peace.
    Should one want peace,
    One must prepare for battle.
    Two sides of the coin, flipped.

    How many are the gains,
    that so many should be lost?
    If a sacrifice must be made,
    Shouldn't the leader pay the cost?
    Let the leader pay the cost!

    How many are the stinging blows,
    Scarring, bruising, causing pain?
    Twelve or twenty, forty- thirty?
    Guess only the Trinity knows.
    The evidence is washed away by rain.

    Drops fall, hanging from a ledge,
    Irregularly are they timed.
    What do such drops signify?
    They can be torture, pain.
    They can be the sound of peace.

    And what is peace, but a fleeting dream?
    Peace and war, both are just illusions.
    And what is war, but wanton destruction?
    An outlet for our shattered dreams.
    War is just an outlet for our shattered peace.

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    That little piece took 14 minutes and 40 seconds to complete. This is kind of fun!

    Edit: Title changed
     
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  20. endless_pain

    endless_pain New Member

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    THOUGHTS
    by:
    endless_pain

    thoughts of you makes me wonder
    thoughts of you makes me sigh
    thoughts of you makes me cry
    just remembring our past life

    I wonder if i ever existed or am i a dream of faith
    I wonder if you see me, i wonder if you're there
    I said i love you but you didnt care
    I said i miss you but you just walked away

    My hearts full of painful tears
    tears that were never washed away;tears that are full of love that is now fading fast
    I said i like you and you just laughed your heart out
    i said i cared for you but still you didnt care

    And now im standing here alone thinking of our painful times together
    my heart aching my head screaming
    i dunno what to do anymore
    help me i'm confused...
    Am i gonna leave you standing..or do i continue on loving you?


    i made this poem myself!:D and i'm proud of it!
     
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